YOUR SPEAKING STYLE
The Scenic Route
You get there in the end. Your listeners might not.
Scenic Route speakers build up to their point the way they thought of it: background, context, a detour, then the answer. It feels thorough. For a listener it can feel like waiting, and in a meeting or an interview, attention often runs out before the point arrives.
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WHAT LISTENERS HEAR
How The Scenic Route comes across
- “So, a bit of background first…”
- Side-tracks and “oh, and also…”.
- An answer that comes in minute two, to a question that needed one sentence.
WHY IT HAPPENS
Why the point comes last
We tend to tell things in the order we worked them out. That makes sense to you, because you know where it's going. Listeners don't, so they spend the build-up trying to guess what matters.
There's often a careful motive too: you want to give enough context that nobody misunderstands, or you're thinking while you talk. Both are understandable, and you can keep the detail. Put the point first and let the detail follow.
WHAT YOU'VE GOT GOING FOR YOU
Your strengths
- You know the detail, and you can back up what you say.
- You make connections other people miss.
- Once your point comes first, your depth becomes an asset instead of a detour.
THREE DRILLS
Start with the first one, today
Right now · 60 seconds
Point first
Answer this out loud: “What did you do last weekend?” Your first sentence must be the answer itself (“I went hiking”). Only then add one detail. Stop. Notice how much easier it is to follow.
5 minutes
What, so what, now what
Take an update you'll give this week. Say it out loud in three sentences: what happened, why it matters, what happens next. If a detail doesn't fit one of the three, leave it for questions.
10 minutes
The headline
Write the one-line headline of your next answer, the line you'd keep if you could say only one. Rehearse saying it first, followed by no more than two supporting details. Record it and time it.
Whatever the drill, record it and listen back once. Most people hear something they didn't notice while speaking.
Want the full picture? Read our guide: How to stop rambling.
WHERE TO START IN SPEAKCONFIDENT
Chapter 5: Structure
What? So what? Now what?
Structure teaches point-first answers, what / so what / now what, the rule of three and signposting. Every take is timed and transcribed, so you can see how quickly your point arrives and how much shorter take two is.
- Chapter 5 · StructurePoint firstGive your answer in the very first sentence.
- Chapter 5 · StructureWhat, so what, now whatSay what, then why it matters, then the next step.
- Chapter 8 · Say LessThe headlineHeadline first, then two details at most.
- Chapter 9 · The RoomAnswer the question askedFirst sentence answers exactly what they asked.
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QUESTIONS
About The Scenic Route
Is rambling the same as being nervous?
Not always. Plenty of calm, confident people ramble because they think out loud. Nerves can make it worse, but the fix is the same: decide your point before you start, and say it first.
How long should an answer be?
It depends on the question, but in meetings and interviews a clear first sentence matters more than length. A useful test is whether someone who stopped listening after your first sentence would still know your answer.
The other five styles
- The SprinterYou know what you want to say, and you say it at full speed.
- The HedgerYour ideas are good. The words around them make them sound unsure.
- The FlatlinerClear and steady, but everything sounds equally important.
- The Fade-OutStrong starts. The ends of your sentences go missing.
- The Natural-in-WaitingYou're already good. Pressure just hides it.
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